How is this poem I wrote?

Its is kind of witty... but it is basically weak on hidden meaning and inuendo. I would like to see more words and phrases with deeper hidden meaning that show more of the emotions of the experience. Like start out i the begging of your poem like it is and then by eight grade use bigger words and conect more what wider dreams and capabilities to conquer the world you have grown into. Like your 8th grade king of the hill line I like that one. I don't know just some thoughts I had while reading your poem. I'm not tring to be Harsh just helpful OK